我自己写的英文自我介绍,大虾们指点一下!

英文系的学生开学免不了要，闲来无事写了一个，请各位大虾们指点一下，我知道这有很多英语高手，挑挑错，吃毛求疵也行。拜托了!!!

PS:我想写的主要是口头自我介绍，因此没用什么高级句型，不过发现写得有点多= =|||

Hi,everyone. My name is ZY. I am from Tangshan. I am an optimistic and positive person. I have many hobbies, such as reading books, listening to the music, seeing films,writing articles, going on a trip and so on. If someone is into them , we can talk with eath other. I like to laugh, because I think laughter is the best words among the people. In this university, I will actively participate in various activities to enrich my university life.I will also constantly exercise myself to become more mature.I hope to make friends with you. I believe the true friendship is better than mellow wine and gold. As distance tests a horse’s strength, so time will reveals a person’s heart. After long, you will find me a worthy friend. That’s all, thank you.